I already have a bunch of small edits I want to make to the accident scene. Mostly technical and description stuff. But, they have to wait until December. *sigh* That's okay.
Reading back through chapter two... erg, it's annoying how many mistakes I make when I'm just writing on and on. Words in the wrong order - showing you my slight dyslexia there, which occurs more often when I'm not thinking slowly enough. Words spelt wrong, but still words so that the spell checker wasn't able to correct them - that's just my fingers typing key combinations they're more used to than the words I wanted to type. Perhaps I will set aside some EXTRA time one weekend for proof reading and fixing up these things in the entire story.
Anyhoo, Chapter Two is put together in one place now. If you have not been reading posts as I've written them, then either use the Bane of Death link above and click Chapter Two, or use
this link.
If you have been reading the posts, there's nothing new or corrected there. Sorry, you're just gonna have to wait for the next post! Should be tonight.
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